That watercolor technique is sweet!I feel like the text could fill that negative space better if placed/sized differently.
i agree the "life of" could be bigger. Sweet but dude this is dope though I love the simplicity of the whole thing.
BUT THE NEGATIVE SPACE FILLED BY THE BLUE IS SUPPOSED TO REPRESENT THE EXISTENTIAL OCEAN, WHICH IS INCREDIBLY EXPANSIVE IN NATURE, WHERE PI IS TRAGICALLY STRANDED WITH A DANGEROUS TIGER---lol ok...
You don't have to fill the space either, you can design it more minimally if you want to get that point accross
Or maybe add a subtle pattern to the background to break up the space? I'm all about that tiger. I love the watercolor+ink look.